2010年广东卷高考英语满分作文

　　2010年广东卷高考英语满分作文
　　第一节 基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
　　以下是一则关于决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。
　　内 容：公共场所禁烟
　　实施时间：2011年1月1日起
　　实施范围：全国
　　目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟
　　措 施：张贴禁烟标志
　　相关数据：
　　(1)吸烟人数：约3.5亿
　　(2)分 布：男性75%;女性：25%
　　(3)受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿
　　(4)因二手烟：超过10万/年
　　二手烟：second-hand smoke
　　[写作内容]
　　请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括：
　　1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围;
　　2.目标和措施;
　　3.相关数据。
　　[写作要求]
　　只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
　　[评分标准]
　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
　　答案：My country begins to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st,2011.The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking. There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these smokers, about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second smoke.
　　试题分析：符合题目要求、语法正确、文字连贯通顺，条理清晰
　　高考考点：5句话写作 复合句及并列句的应用
　　第二节 读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)
　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
　　In junior high school, one of my classmates, Ethan, was addicted to TV. This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who’s the Boss?
　　Then one day Ethan’s mother made him an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quit TV. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.
　　In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out
　　experiments with paying kids with cash for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will.Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should be despite decades of reforms and budget increases.
　　[写作内容]
　　1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。
　　2.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：
　　(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：
　　(2)你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的;
　　(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习
　　[写作要求]
　　1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
　　2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
　　[评分标准]
　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
　　答案：The passage is mainly about parents give money to their children so that they can show up or get good grades recently by the way of taking the example of Ethan and his mother.
　　试题分析：写一个用金钱鼓励孩子的现象的讨论的议论文，内容涉及分析原因和表达的看法。
　　高考考点：观点态度、原因、重点复合句的应用。