Sandy is seventeen years old. And she is much busy. Sbe never has enough time for that she wants to do. Like many other girls about her age, she spends hours on the telephone, talks to her friends. She often goes out on the weekends, and she looks after children for other families to get some money. But, of course, during the school years she herself has a lot homework to do. During the football season, Sandy is more busier than usual She and other pretty girls are cheer leaders. They jump up and down together, cheering when the team have played well. When the team is not playing so well, the girls try their best encourage the players. The cheers are usually not long, but it takes a long time to practise shouting them together.
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Key：
1.把much改为very。much多与-ed的形容词连用。
2.that改为what或all。what she wants to do 她想做的事。all (that) =what。
3.talks改为talking，为spend b time+ doing...句式。
4.去掉weekends前的the。on weekends在周末。
5.But改为And。根据下文判断。
6.在a lot后加of。a lot of 许多。
7.去掉more或把nlore改为much。busier为比较级。
8.正确。
9.have改为has。team为集合名词，作整体看时，谓语用单数。
10.在encourage前加too try one’s best to do尽最大努力去做。